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I hate my life i want to die
all i ever do is seem to cry
i deepen the cuts along my wrists
the blood it runs deep in my fists
you dont care about me or what i do
my lifes an open wound with or without you
you mademe this way a depressed little bitch
Im like someone whos happy but has a glitch
i show my smile but its all a lie
id rather fake it then breakdown and cry
my eyes they burn from all the tears
i wish i could shar with you all of my fears
I'll slit my throat and make you see
what the hell you've done to me
im dieing now and you dont care
i know that this is hard to bare
with my last gasp i speak your name
my life is gone what a damn shame
©2005-2010 ~PitifulxRomance
:iconpitifulxromance:

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I Show My Smile But Its All A Lie
Id Rather Fake It Then Break Down And Cry

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:icondark-suicide:
:cry: so sad... well... sometime (everytime!!!!) I feel like you... did you do the drawing? If yes, it's awesome!

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Hollow inside... no feelings to hold me down, I'll go where the wind goes...
:iconthrowmeaway:
OMMMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG THIS IS SO GOOOOOOOODDDDDDD! I hate you! This is my favorite so far!

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it is the spectator, and not life, that art really mirrors.
:icondeadlyhamster:
Great Job!!!! This poem describes how I feel a lot of the time as well. I can really relate.

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~How will you know I am hurting,
If you cannot see my pain?
To wear it on my body
Tells what words cannot explain.~
:iconpitifulxromance:
thanks

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tonight's a p e r f e c t night to die
& what i've got planned is a b e a u t i f u l suicide
the phone's disconnected,
the cord tied in a knot
-quite a distorted image-
in twelve minutes I drop
:iconpitifulxromance:
Thanks:w00t:

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tonight's a p e r f e c t night to die
& what i've got planned is a b e a u t i f u l suicide
the phone's disconnected,
the cord tied in a knot
-quite a distorted image-
in twelve minutes I drop
:iconkillerkow118:
really well written! It rocks! I love your artwork of the rose and the heart! Do you think you can make a copy of it so we could use it as an illustration for the Reed? We can put your name on it or put it is as ananymos if you don't want kids in school to know you wrote it!

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I'm a poem junky who rights what she feels!

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